Hi! My name is Ye siyu.I’m girl. I’m .I like draw pictures and dance .Usually l go to school on foot.Sometimes l go by bus. Berause my home is near. I often read book and play computer games the weekend.名师点评：这是小作者发表的第一篇英语作文，在这篇作文里，她向我们介绍了她自己，包括小作者的爱好，上学所选择的交通方式等。要注意的是，文中“Berause”要改为“Because”,“the weekend”改为“at weekends”。用英语来练习写作文，更能激发同学们学习英语的兴趣。希望你再接再厉！（学乐中国特聘教师：邹紫老师）2009-11-13 20:41:00